“I can’t do this, Megan.” It’s been too long for her.
“Oh, come on! Estelle, you can do this.”
It was all one big muted scream for her. One big sharp pain was enough to knock her out. One step was all it took.
One step, turn.
The crowd was in awe. Children clapping, except for one little girl. She look away as if she knew what was going to happen.
One step, turn and jump.
Something about that girl made Estelle look back, mid jump. Time stood still as the girl snapped her fingers and a grin appeared on her face.
One step, turn and jump. Then you slip.
It’s very cool how much you built the tension over such a short space of time! The repetition of the ‘one step’ bit was great. Nice work 🙂
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Thanks Joshua 😊
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This was gripping
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Thanks ❤
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Evil. I like it. 😂
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😂😂😂 Evil? Nahhhh, the worst is yet to come 🙏
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What, you’re going to write about me? 😇
😂
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Haha, no dw 😂 I just wrote a summary of Sealle’s timeline….
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Shushshuhshsuh
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How to get Nour to hate you 101 😂
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Be PJ 😂
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Obviously, 😁… I’m going to ask you for some help about it after the next chapter so, keep an eye out 😊
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Yaaaas let’s ruin everything and everyone 😂😂😂
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Wasn’t that always the plan?
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Well, it always will be 😇
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Always the innocent ones, aren’t we? 😂
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Duh. Why would anyone think otherwise?
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I don’t know… I mean, you should read what I’m writing atm, chapter wise, I’m giving people mid life crisis’… It’s kinda fun 😂 some real plot twists going down.
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In my story, there’s abuse, drugs, murder, gangs and sick stuff in general. So, I’d say that’s quite relatable xD
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I. Must. Read.
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I’ll send chu it after we’re done with the collaboration, chapter by chapter :3
I’ve some pretty interesting soon-to-come villains. But, you must do the same! Fair enough, eh? 😇
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Okay, sure. Why not 😂 I was thinking about it and I have some ideas, I’ll send you them soon 😊
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Great :3
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Those performers amaze me and sword swallowers. Yikes.
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Same here, it’s a good act 😊
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Wonderful 💙💙
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Thank you 😊
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